Hope is the glint you catch on a stream that keeps you walking until you find water,
It is that glimmer you see on the horizon that signals that you’re almost there.
It is the flash of light from a million miles away that lets you know that you’re not alone.
The brightness in your eyes that assures us that we’re still alive.
Light is the first thing you see when you enter the world and the last thing when you leave.
With lightness we can see, see what was, is and what can be and with that we can have hope.
I like this, but something slightly altered the flow, when I read it again , I thought that if you kept the us to you, as you have used in other sentences it would flow better.
Just a thought, clever girl xxx
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